Wednesday, August 5, 2009

TWW - glamour, accentuate, pitch

Hollywood

here’s the pitch

act one
small town
glamour girl
in the big city

act two
dreams bloom
then die
a tease of love
unrequited
bubble of hope
evaporated

act three
accentuate
her decline
suicidal ending
zoom in
on dead eyes

roll credits

10 comments:

  1. And therein lies a life. Nice work - I like the format and style of this...

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  2. So darn sad, so darn true...and well done.

    Radio Nowhere

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  3. I love the way you treated this. Excellent.

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  4. I love the presentation of this. Great work with this prompt.

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  5. Great treatment on the prompt words. Reads like a script, too. Nice.

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  6. Cool! A three act play for 3WW!
    Nicely!!

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  7. love the form of this! Great use of the prompt!

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  8. sounds like one of those depressing flicks that wins oscars, good take on 3ww

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