Wednesday, October 28, 2009

TWW - Nightmare

Nightmare

sweet becomes sour
in the nightmare hour
thoughts incubate
fear, worry, hate
dreams twist and curl
hopes billow and whirl
much creative vanity
converts to insanity
‘til deep in the dark
a spark lights the way
a return from sleep's madness
to dawn of new day

10 comments:

  1. Like song lyrics, these lines. And some really great ones, too.

    Lurid

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  2. This read like a song. Nicely done.

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  3. I really liked the way the words bounced.

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  4. I will find myself singing this in the shower .. this is super!
    patsy

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  5. love this, and dreams do twist and curl - quite wonderfully put

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  6. makes one almost /appreciate/ the alarm clock...

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