Wednesday, October 28, 2009

TWW - Nightmare

Nightmare

sweet becomes sour
in the nightmare hour
thoughts incubate
fear, worry, hate
dreams twist and curl
hopes billow and whirl
much creative vanity
converts to insanity
‘til deep in the dark
a spark lights the way
a return from sleep's madness
to dawn of new day
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9 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczOctober 28, 2009 at 10:04 AM

    Like song lyrics, these lines. And some really great ones, too.

    Lurid

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  2. anthonynorthOctober 28, 2009 at 10:34 AM

    This read like a song. Nicely done.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 28, 2009 at 2:31 PM

    the rhyme and rythm of this is amazing.

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  4. Daily PanicOctober 28, 2009 at 3:31 PM

    I really liked the way the words bounced.

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  5. Tumblewords:October 28, 2009 at 11:49 PM

    A lovely rhythmic piece of truth!

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  6. PblacksawOctober 28, 2009 at 11:54 PM

    I will find myself singing this in the shower .. this is super!
    patsy

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  7. lissaOctober 29, 2009 at 1:02 PM

    love this, and dreams do twist and curl - quite wonderfully put

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  8. gautami tripathyOctober 30, 2009 at 12:24 PM

    Like this..

    the waiting

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  9. PJDOctober 30, 2009 at 6:16 PM

    makes one almost /appreciate/ the alarm clock...

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