Wednesday, July 8, 2009

TWW - kneel, transparent, gloom

You know the drill - make a poem using the 3 words from the Three Word Wednesday prompt... transparent was hard for me to fit in...


Move

don’t kneel in the shadow
praying for sunshine

where there is darkness
there must also be light

gloom begets gloom,
get up, choose a direction,

any road will take you
somewhere else

don’t kneel at the window
peering through,

the way is transparent,
just move
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17 comments:

  1. anthonynorthJuly 8, 2009 at 10:11 AM

    Important advice there.

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  2. AnonymousJuly 8, 2009 at 10:38 AM

    Oh, this is simply great.

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  3. Thom GabrukiewiczJuly 8, 2009 at 11:17 AM

    Simple, and simply great, like Noah says. And yes, if people would just move...

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  4. lissaJuly 8, 2009 at 11:25 AM

    simply terrific

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  5. julie kingJuly 8, 2009 at 1:00 PM

    so nice, kristy! you did a great job. i feel that way some days -- wanting to just hide in the shadows and be invisible. then some song on the radio or a bit of color in my art room or a phrase read in a book will kick my butt into gear.

    thanks for the reminder to move!!

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  6. Linda JacobsJuly 8, 2009 at 2:10 PM

    Absolutely! Great message!

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  7. Tumblewords:July 8, 2009 at 6:54 PM

    Moving is good for the soul! And for cobweb reduction, as well! Good reminder.

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  8. AnonymousJuly 8, 2009 at 8:29 PM

    It sounds like something I would read in a religious or theological work. So very sound and basic thoughts here.

    Nice write.

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  9. AnonymousJuly 9, 2009 at 12:06 AM

    Ooh, I really like that. Sounds like a mantra.

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  10. MaelstromJuly 9, 2009 at 1:23 AM

    Wonderful advice. One doesn't change things without action.

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  11. Andy SewinaJuly 9, 2009 at 5:07 AM

    Phew! I love instructables!

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  12. AnonymousJuly 9, 2009 at 12:32 PM

    I agree--just move!
    lovely.

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  13. PJDJuly 10, 2009 at 5:32 PM

    uplifting and inspirational. carpe diem!

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  14. gautami tripathyJuly 10, 2009 at 10:52 PM

    Like the message..

    a day in a child's life

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  15. AnonymousJuly 11, 2009 at 12:44 PM

    very inspiring...

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  16. Alexandra MacVeanJuly 13, 2009 at 4:59 PM

    Kristy, you do a fantastic job here! Wow!

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  17. Alexandra MacVeanJuly 17, 2009 at 6:23 PM

    Hope you are doing OK.

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